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         , US (<a href="https://www.state.gov/wp-content/uploads/2022/04/Declaration-for-the-Future-for-the-Internet.pdf" target="_blank">DFI</a>), and Canada (<a href="https://ised-isde.canada.ca/site/innovation-better-canada/en/canadas-digital-charter-trust-digital-world" target="_blank">DC</a>), narrowed down to <b>OpenSource</b> XR experiences via <b>link traversal</b>.<br>
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-      <h3>Why do people want it</h3>
+      <h3>Why people want it</h3>
 
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-        XR digital <b>hypermedia</b> commons empower societies to share spatial experiences across different platforms and hardware.<br>
-        This connectivity empowers citizens to build upon existing open-source foundations and shared data, accelerating innovation by allowing them to "remix" and expand the world instead of constantly reinventing the wheel.
+        XR digital <b>hypermedia</b> commons empower societies to share spatial experiences for all platforms and hardware.<br>
+        Connected experiencesempowers citizens to extend
+        <u tabindex="0">existing
+          <span>open-source foundations and shared data</span>
+        </u>foundations to accelerate 
+        <u tabindex="0">innovation
+          <span>, by allowing them to "remix" and expand the world, </span>
+        </u>instead of constantly reinventing the wheel.
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