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- The metaverse hype has shown that people want to keep using
existing 2D ecosystems.
+ The metaverse hype has shown: people
prefer using
existing 2D ecosystems.
Hence, we promote
projecting those as virtual worlds.
In particular, the
Fediverse
, a fleet of ad-free federated platforms,
as backoffice for virtual
XR hypermedia experiences.
- Connected experiences allow citizens to extend
+ Connected experiences
allow anybody to extend
existing
open-source foundations and shared data
foundations to accelerate
innovation
, by allowing them to "remix" and expand the world
- , instead of constantly reinventing the wheel.
+ .
+
Byebye constantly reinventing the wheel / walled gardens.
+
Hello post-scarcity technology.